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Name: Amick
Country: United States
State: California
Birthday: 8/23/1988
Gender: Male


Interests: poetry, bball, conversations, hangin out, not too much on this cat
Expertise: poetry, freestyle rhyming, working on the rapping though
Occupation: Student


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Member Since: 5/5/2004

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Saturday, October 16, 2004

alrite guys...gonna write a song,

don't kno how--short or long?:

the best thing happened to me the other day...

i was walking one way, and hey,

see a girl with glasses, carrying some books,

smiling at me and givin' me looks,

i continued to walk, saw a girl on my right...

flippin her hair, standing out in the light,

i smiled at her, and she looked away,

i said to myself its cool, most don't look back anyway

again i saw a girl, crying in public,

she was showin her emotions, i couldn't help but to love it,

saw a girl on the bus in front of me that was talking,

another outside that was not afraid of walking,

i saw a girl with a gleam in her eye,

another one smiling as i walked by,

saw another girl with the most beautiful eyes,

another with beautiful hair with ties

girls to my left, were studying for a test

girls on my right, were lookin' their best

girls to the left of me, girls to my right,

girls girls everywhere, taking over my sight

girls in my peripheral vision, others i can't see,

girls all around just surroundin' me

what do i do, what do i say,

"take it easy Amick, its all ok"

then i try, open my eyes, take off the disguise,

battle my own lies, try to be wise,

i clear my mind of all things and start to think of one person,

one person, help me instead of letting me worsen,

i open my eyes slowly and focus on one object

You i see and wonder if i'm with God yet, not yet

i focus on you, you being all i imagine,

and think to myelf, what just had happened?

i saw plenty of girls, then lost my focus,

open my eyes, surprise! ure there like some hocus pocus

wearing ure glasses, carrying ure books,

flippin ure hair and giving me looks,

smiling at me, you and ure beautiful eyes,

with your beautiful hair, all laced in ties,

as i smiled at you, and nodded my head,

u were like a princess in a story i read

your hair tied up, and the shy way you talk,

pouring out your emotions when we take a walk,

then i realize, we're a perfect match'n

ure the girl in my thoughts, you're all i can imagine

all those girls that i see and say "ooo"

aren't just some girls, but all part of you

your laughing, you're talking,

you're smiling, you're walking,

you're studying, you're crying,

it was me you were eyeing,

and no i'm not lying,

we're a match made in heaven,

we're three more than seven,

we're everything we are, and we totally cashed in

ure the girl of my dreams, the only one i imagined

This one goes out to all the ladies who've been loved, are loved, and that will be loved, for no one i know can truly see love, but once they've found it, should never be free of.  Love makes the world go round, stop it now, and we'll be dead in the ground. Peace and love to my friend and foe, tell someone you love them.....for they may never know.

 

 


Monday, August 23, 2004

Hello erybody...this summer was blurred..

but its time to puase now..on August 23,

Today is my birthday, 16 years old

Still standing reckless, courageous and bold

Don't kno if those definitions are the best to describe me,

I've been complimenting my self as if my ego's tryin' to bribe me

It's hard these days to find ppl to trust and confide in me

It's like i'm wearing a mask...and my true self's deep inside of me

The outside of me trapping me inside and hiding me

My own self against me...betrayed me and lied to me

It's a inner conflict never settled in the true life of a person,

They just hide it inside until it hurts and it worsens

I think lately I've been acting far more egotistic

A self-centered dipsh*t, behaving narcissistic

But less on myself...and more on my birthday...

You can sense the conceitedness even on the worse days

Anyway...havn't updated in a while...

Thought I should write more and update it in style

Made it on two xangas-johnson's and andreas'

Have you read them lately? Especially andreas'--how gay is his?

LOL Andreas..u kno i'm just playing...

Half of the stuff i write-i don't remember saying

I've really started to enjoy classical music...

It's like a theme song for your life that you can download and use it

Whatever ure taste is...it's ure right to choose it

Make sure u like it and don't loose it

Whatever that means..i'm just a nuisance..

My rhyming is out of time and i feel that i'm loosin' it

It's a talent that i have...i love it to death

it makes up for my laziness and bad breath...

and i said to myself i'd make this a meaningful entry

and guard the rhymes in it like a watchful sentry...

but i guess it turns out a bad one...

the day is not over but i think i've had one...

Thanks to all my friends who've truly been there for me,

If I still have ure number, i'll call u when i'm forty

Well then you guys...sorry the entry wasn't long...

I'm going to write a song...

and a music video with it...honest...

email me if u want in on it...

last thing to write..please take note...

its time for another Amick Quote

if u ever feel like someone else in a mask...

making stuff up..and pullin stuff out ure ass...

then check ureself..and make sure its you...

cuz wutever you've said and done..you'll be held to


Saturday, June 12, 2004

Well everybody, school's finally over,

My mom thought i wouldn't do well so i finally showed her

that yes Amick can be smart, Amick can make the grade

Now summer is here--time to find shade

Ryan i've been thinking about what you said

after commenting on the poem you read,

I thank all the troops that are constantly fighting,

Without all of them...I wouldn't be writing

They fight for our country, our freedom and rights,

They fight through scorching hot days...and endless nights,

My prayers go out to them, those valiant few,

Who risk their life everyday, for me and for you

Ryan I meant no offense with the poem I wrote,

Sorry for any taken, I shall make note

Well like I said, two more days until break

Thanx Gail for telling me who's real and who's fake

I havn't wrote an entry on my xanga for long

I didn't have time, i'm sure that's not wrong

and psh Sam, your comments about playing me ball

I'd like to rise to your challenge while u take the fall

I may not be great, and u may be a black man,

But when I step on the court...they say "look out, here comes pacman!"

And someone called me ugly, the same who I'd thot it'd be

None other than 2006's very own prodigy

Notice I chose not to capitalize the P

No respect for you, just as none given to me

Others who commented and subcribed to my xanga,

Without further ado I'd just like to thank ya,

Its people like you, who fuel my poetry,

Read my poems bout you guys, and you'll know its me

We'll miss u class 04 since you guys are leaving,

Its your positive energy that kept us believing...

that Oxford IS great, and it IS worth to be here,

But now u guys are leaving and there's not much left to see here,

Good luck with your future and thanx for the past,

We'll remember you people...as well as your class

Well its around 11:30, and I'm pretty tired,

Yesterday I ruined my chance with the one I admired,

I guess its normal for me tho to be rejected a lot

Its like I say bye after projecting a thought,

wutever it is, it adds to my loss,

and everytime, seemingly, I pay the cost,

You kno who u are, i don't want u to feel guilty,

Nor do I want for u to go crazy and kill me,

Well I'm going to conclude this with an "Amick" quote

So if you would, please take note,

I hate it when people say something's fake or can't happen,

remember, "reality is an excuse for those who can't imagine!"


Thursday, May 06, 2004

Well well...today was just another day in the life...
glad i have no children...and glad i have no wife...
today was really sad, in the morning in meloche...
just a thought: today i never saw josh
anyway...on a more sincere note, this morning was sad,
the troops up in iraq are making the US look bad...
i'm pissed at the soldiers who'd do this to others,
aren't we all children? sisters and brothers?
i dont really kno em or what their intentions meant
but i wrote a lil poem for my anger to vent:

The soldiers come in and its torture again,
Raping the females, and raping the men,
The pain they all go through, no one can measure,
All just for fun? All just for pleasure?
And what do they gain from all of this mess?
Maybe one person who dares to confess?
Just a few soldiers who are all pleasure-hungry
Bring shame and dishonor to all of our country.

That is all i finished writing in that class,
my thoughts had just flowed, so i waited for time to pass,
the rest of the day was easy, up until the end,
when i recorded stats for junior high track with jatin my friend
Then guess what? its like i saw a hot chick from a movie with ben stiller,
but it was none other than OXford's own Allison Miller!
so i asked her for a ride...and she happily said yes,
i put my stuff in the back, and sat in front, yes, i'm the best...
anyway, she dropped me off, and she then drove off speeding,
its ok, i had my day, and i think she was late for a meeting
i came home and sat here for a while...and thought about things in the news
i feel bad for chaldu, cuz i kno in his heart that he thinks san antonio can still loose
but i was thinking of when they release those lists with select people that are hot,
so i thought i would come up wit my own list...ah what the heck..y not?
Angelina Jolie is, and so is Beyonce,
Jennifer Lopez is, and so is Ashanti,
i love Keira Knightley, cuz she's very hot,
Lindsay Lohan is pretty, Mischa from the OC is not
I thought i would add oxford girls to this, but then i would just be messing...
so for all u still left wondering...i guess u'll still be guessing
well guys, for those who are wondering bout Marian and are concerned little folks,
bow down to the master, the master of hoax...
yes you got tricked and indubiously decieved,
I'm just glad nothing real happened, yes i'm relieved
well, its ten thirty, time to call it a day,
if only erything tomorrow could all go my way...


Wednesday, May 05, 2004

Currently Playing
Fields of Gold: The Best of Sting 1984-1994
By Sting
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- Fields of Gold

May 5, 2004

today i was caught up in an engaging conversation

wit sijia and lan...and they're both asian!

dont get me wrong, i am not racist,

its just a neat way to remember some faces

so we talked about movies, actors, and even keira knightley,

i was reluctant to tell them about my fear of spike lee

we talked about music and this one scottish band,

whose name i've never heard of: Franz Ferdinand?

history test rite after that, and i kno that i did well,

i tripped while playing tag this morning, then i fell

lunch was awesome as always it is,

said hi to ppls like ashley and liz,

sat down and ate my lunch very quietly,

people questioned my silence...hello...HI ITS ME!

spanish was fun...we started on our scripts,

i felt awkward telling gail that she had luscious lips,

i guess thas a tip to not say something stupid,

it slipped off my tongue, i wasn't actually gonna do it

hung out after school with johnson and lindsay...

i thought about johnson what kinda guy is he?

he tried to deliver a blow in my croch area

so i kicked his balls and said.."dint mean to scare ya"

then he snuck up behind me and tried to do the same...

JOHNSON: ITS NOT A FREAKIN GAME!

i walked to the bus stop and there was a roadblock...

so i had to walk all the way over to the next stop

got home and said, i had a dam good day,

tomorrow i hope turns out to be just that way



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